Monday, August 17, 2015

Explanation Writing Nā Jaleel & Sharleze

WALT write an explanation about why we need to learn to swim.

Why you should learn to swim.  

Alot of people don’t know how to swim but if you learn how to swim the number of drownings in New Zealand each year will drop.

Firstly, swimming is a way of moving your body in the water. You can get someone to teach you how to kick and float also you need to learn how to breathe in the water.

How do you learn how to swim?
You can learn how to swim by going to a public swim school like Pioneer or Jelly Park where you will get a teacher and they will teach you the basics.

Where can you swim?
You can swim at a public swimming pool,lake or a river also at a beach. It’s good to swim there, because it is a public space and if you need help there are a lot of people there that can and will help you.

Who can do it?
It doesn’t matter how old or young you are you could be a 58 year old person and still learn how to swim.
It is important to learn how to swim

Nā Jaleel & Sharleze

1 comment:

  1. I like the way you have set out your explanation girls, and included a nice introduction in your beginning sentence. You cover the importance of swimming, how to learn and where you can swim. Even a 58 year old can learn to swim - just as well I have already learned how to swim!